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今天是2020年2月27日 - P1-P5第二次考試、P.6呈分試
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  題目:My Day 刊登日期:2019年12月17日  
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My Day


My Day

       On Sundays, I have breakfast with my family at McDonald’s at eight o’clock in the morning. We have pancakes, orange juice and hamburgers. They are my cup of tea.

       I have a drawing lesson at ten o’clock in the morning. I like Disney characters such as Winnie the Pooh and Elsa. My teacher always appreciates my drawing. The lesson is interesting.

       I go to the park at one o’clock in the afternoon. There are a lot of beautiful flowers and trees. I love playing on the swing with my friend. It is a wonderful time.

       We go shopping in Discovery Park at half past seven in the evening. There are different kinds of shops. We buy new toys and new clothes.

       At night, I go to bed at ten o’clock. I am over the moon on Sunday nights because my mother tells amazing and funny stories to me.

  
作者名稱:
許迦晞 (XU KA HEI )
文章創作於
2019-2020 年度( 1A )。
 
謮者評分:
整體平均評分 ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ (滿天星)共有票數1061
老師評語: What a busy day! It is good to see you can use the idioms in your writing.
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讀者評語:
呂丞璐
(4A )的評語:
文章充滿童真,令人忍俊不禁。
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池靄蕎
(3D )的評語:
這是一篇寫得很好的記敘文。
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