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  題目:An Unforgettable Day 刊登日期:2019年12月17日  
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An Unforgettable Day


An Unforgettable Day

       Today is a holiday. The weather is warm and sunny. My family and I go to visit Happy Farm. I am over the moon.

       The farm is large. There are a lot of plants and animals on the farm. I can see some strawberries, carrots, watermelons and corn. Dad likes the donkeys so he takes some pictures with the donkeys. Mum buys some strawberries. I like strawberries most because they make my mouth water.

       Later, we go to the pond. I see some ducks and ducklings swimming peacefully in the pond. Suddenly, some naughty kids throw pebbles at the ducks and ducklings. I see red. I say, ‘Oh no! Look at the kids Mum! They hurt the cute animals. They are naughty!’

       I tell the farmer. The farmer stops the naughty kids. The farmer asks, ‘Why do you hurt the cute animals?’ The kids say, ‘We are sorry! We are just playing!’ And they run away. Mum says, ‘The farmer saves the ducks.’ It is an unforgettable day. I go home joyfully.

  
作者名稱:
洪嘉彤 (HUNG KA TUNG KADENCE )
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老師評語: There are so many things to do on the farm. You must have a wonderful day.
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文章立意積極,主題鮮明,用詞得當。
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