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  題目:My Favourite Story 刊登日期:2019年12月18日  
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My Favourite Story


My Favourite Story

       Hello everyone! I am Megan. My favourite story is The Life-Saving Hero. I like this book the best because it teaches us how to judge people by their actions.

       Handsome Howard was every girl’s dreamboat at school. He had a strong body and spoke with a deep voice that made girls go weak at the knees. In the same class, shy Herbert had a boring hairstyle and did not talk much.

       During the summer holiday, class 4C went to the beach to have fun. However, two girls were bored so they each grabbed an inflatable ring and went into the water. Suddenly, a big wave came crashing down onto the girls. “Help! Help!” the girls cried but the beach did not have a lifeguard. All the classmates shouted and wanted Howard to save them but he couldn’t swim well.

       Without saying a word, Herbert dashed into the sea to save the drowning girls. Yeah!! Herbert was a hero and he humbly smiled but everyone glared at Howard and call him Coward. This is the end of my presentation. Thank you!

  
作者名稱:
譚芷晴 (TAM TSZ CHING )
文章創作於
2019-2020 年度( 3E )。
 
謮者評分:
整體平均評分 ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ☆ ☆ (八粒星)共有票數324
老師評語: Your writing is creative! You portrayed the story vividly. Good job!
小編輯評語:
讀者評語:
王竣丰
(6B )的評語:
文章的形容詞運用得很生動。
作者回應 -
馬芷惠
(4C )的評語:
文章幽默詼諧,令我覺得很有趣。
作者回應 -
池靄蕎
(3D )的評語:
文章用詞華麗,讀來讓人賞心悅目。
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