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明天是 2020年2月24日 -Day E
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  題目:My Big Rewards 刊登日期:2019年12月18日  
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My Big Rewards


Dear Sally,

 

I am happy to hear that you have won a medal in your swimming gala. Last month, I also took park in the running race on Sports Day. I won a bronze medal.

 

I always practised running with my friend, Elvis at weekends in the summer holidays. Sometimes he ran faster than I but sometimes I ran faster than he. It was exciting but tiring.

 

Sports Day was on the twentieth of September. First, I joined a 100-metre race. This time, I was the second last to pass the finishing line. I felt blue and disappointed. Luckily, my teammates encouraged me. Then, I joined the 4X100 metre relay. I tried my best and was faster than the other runners. At last, our team was the second runner-up and I won a bronze model. I was over the moon and celebrated with my teammates. Next year, I will practise more to win a gold medal.

 

Did you take part in any races on your Sports Day? Looking forward to hearing from you.

 

Best,

Grace

  
作者名稱:
楊亦晞 (YOUNG YIK HEI )
文章創作於
2019-2020 年度( 4B )。
 
謮者評分:
整體平均評分 ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ☆ (九粒星)共有票數186
老師評語: It is true that no pain, no gain!
小編輯評語:
讀者評語:
楊亦晞
(4B )的評語:
文章的人物心理活動描寫得很細膩。
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馬時樂
(3C )的評語:
這是一篇寫得很好的記敘文。
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馬芷惠
(4C )的評語:
文章的人物心理活動描寫得很細膩。
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池靄蕎
(3D )的評語:
這是一篇寫得很好的記敘文。
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